kate_nepveu: sleeping cat carved in brown wood (Default)
Kate ([personal profile] kate_nepveu) wrote 2005-08-23 03:52 pm (UTC)

Thanks for such a detailed response. In the 6.32.64-65 sequence, I hadn't considered that maybe Son Goku was jumping to kick Kou and not just to get closer or try and land on him--the bent right leg hadn't registered. I do think Kou's supposed to be turning--his earrings are swinging in that reaction shot--but as you can see from the belated comment, that didn't occur to me until well after this post, so I still think that could've been clearer.

Good catch on reading 6.32.85 much more closely than I did--I'd kind of given up by that point, because I assumed that the "stagger" was linked to the punch on panel 2 of the prior page. But if it isn't, perhaps that's not a punch in 84.2 at all, but the start of the yank on Gojyo's grabbing hand? It _looks_ like a punch, but the sound effects would make a lot more sense:

2: swing
3: Son Goku grabs at the arm that Gojyo's grabbing his face with
4: Son Goku: hah-hah, nice try
5: Gojyo: oh shit
85: Son Goku pulls Gojyo's hand off his face and shoves into Gojyo

Yeah, I kinda like it. Thanks!

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