Interesting comments, especially about 1-07-180! I don't quite remember what I did the first time around, but I think I sort of like the effect of William's sight-line going off-panel and leading to Emma, especially as it could be an indication of exactly what's on his mind at the time.

I really love Mori's completely wordless sequences; she manages to convey so much just by body language and expressions and choice of panelling.