Yeah, 1.1.54 fails because of that speech balloon that overlaps the border. I can see why she put it in there - because the border is otherwise too big and would divide the page visually in a rather too-obvious way - but since she otherwise conforms to the convention of having overlapping speech bubbles signify the path you're supposed to follow, it doesn't work right. She tried to fix that - the bubble only goes partially into the space and doesn't overlap that other panel - but the convention is too strong.
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Date: 2005-07-28 05:07 pm (UTC)