Oh! They're strips on _Goku_'s prison! I thought Sanzo was using them for some reason, which would've been a first I think. Okay, I get it now. *duh*
As for story structure, if you don't mind I'll try to muddle through it myself; I'm kind of putting a lot of non-art things aside with notes that I need to think hard about them later. As for probably-former-Gonou, well, I agree that he died at the castle, but since that's not _quite_ text, and because "nameless" sounds dumb, I went with the wording I did.
I wish he'd been able to finish the "My name is--" sentence that Sanzo interrupted.
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Date: 2005-08-05 11:29 am (UTC)As for story structure, if you don't mind I'll try to muddle through it myself; I'm kind of putting a lot of non-art things aside with notes that I need to think hard about them later. As for probably-former-Gonou, well, I agree that he died at the castle, but since that's not _quite_ text, and because "nameless" sounds dumb, I went with the wording I did.
I wish he'd been able to finish the "My name is--" sentence that Sanzo interrupted.