Um, lots of useless nodding and uh-huhing from me here. I don't recall how I did with those fight scenes when I read them in the manga, but I could follow your meaning very clearly with each one here--yes, this fight scene is clear and coherant, but this one is confusing, etc. ::ponders:: I'm highly suggestible, I think.
Did you make a separate link to this in manga_talk that I just missed? (I followed telophase's link to this particular essay.) If you didn't, I encourage you to do so with each new essay. The comm's pretty quiet and heaven knows this is on topic, so it's not exactly spam, and I personally am awful about remembering to check back on "to be updated" sites without fresh reminders.
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Date: 2005-08-22 06:54 pm (UTC)Hee! Nicely put.
Um, lots of useless nodding and uh-huhing from me here. I don't recall how I did with those fight scenes when I read them in the manga, but I could follow your meaning very clearly with each one here--yes, this fight scene is clear and coherant, but this one is confusing, etc. ::ponders:: I'm highly suggestible, I think.
Did you make a separate link to this in manga_talk that I just missed? (I followed telophase's link to this particular essay.) If you didn't, I encourage you to do so with each new essay. The comm's pretty quiet and heaven knows this is on topic, so it's not exactly spam, and I personally am awful about remembering to check back on "to be updated" sites without fresh reminders.