The school year format really imposes odd pacing requirements, I think, and that may have sometning to do with that--it's hard to do an entire school year of just the growing tension.
I wonder if the loyalty theme might run counter to the structure you identify--Harry wins not because he conquers his own self-doubts about his nature, but because he defends Dumbledore.
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Date: 2007-03-29 05:54 pm (UTC)The school year format really imposes odd pacing requirements, I think, and that may have sometning to do with that--it's hard to do an entire school year of just the growing tension.
I wonder if the loyalty theme might run counter to the structure you identify--Harry wins not because he conquers his own self-doubts about his nature, but because he defends Dumbledore.