I certainly am more comfortable, from my peculiar focus on POV, when those issues are addressed. I keep getting twitchy every time in _Melusine_ that Mildmay's narration appears retrospective or explicitly narrated to another person, since it seems very unlikely that the series as a whole is meant to be.
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Date: 2007-05-26 09:32 pm (UTC)Or, maybe I'm just oversensitive. Whatever.